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Question by Robert: Please someone who English is his/her native language edits this short text?
Hi,

I want to put this text on my website. So it should be fluent without any problem. Please someone who speaks English as his first language edits this text, correct its punctuation, cast its sentences…. To put in a nutshell, do any changes that seems to be needed.

In advance, I thank you for your generous time

MY TEXT:
Direct service results cheaper and more reliable service. At present several online web hosting providers are working as sub-partners of BraveNet. In other words, they resell this service to people in more expensive cost. By omitting intermediates, here you have this chance to obtain this service directly, cheaper and more reliable.

Best answer:

Answer by steve m
……results IN cheaper….
AT A more expensive cost…..
INTERMIDIARIES here.you have A chance( 2 this’s not good)
more RELIABLY…..

otherwise well done!

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